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Nominator: Brynn Who Likes Editing (talk · contribs) 19:16, 13 August 2026 (UTC)
Reviewer: Sddarealone (talk · contribs) 19:44, 16 September 2026 (UTC)
Reviewing this as a part of WT:GARC#131, I will begin with the review shortly.
At the moment, I can say though that as a large amount of info within the body draws from fan culture around the TV series, spotchecking will become essential here because of possible WP:OR and WP:NPOV concerns. Other than that, the article looks good to go. As a fun fact, this is my first GANR in which the lede doesn't have a infobox :)
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Sddarealone (talk) 20:35, 16 September 2026 (UTC)
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Reference check
[edit]As the sources from which the references were derived vary a lot, I'm going to list them one by one:
- Teen Vogue: Reliable for popular media.
- Newsweek: Borderline reliable but is generally unreliable after 2013.
- Esquire: Its reliability is disputed as per this latest discussion.
- Parade: although doesn't have a WP:RSN, it looks to be reliable as per their editorial policy and about page.
- Inverse: This seems to be a new player in entertainment news category but they look reliable too as shown by their editor team.
- Collider: has an editor team but no editorial policy and one RSN discussion looks to be a bit concerning.
- HOLA! USA: Doesn't have an editorial policy, about page or discussions on RSN. Again I'm keeping this as the editor is a staff writer.
- The Tab: This RSN discussion looks concerning and the staff writer is relatively new going by the ranks of staff editors.
- TV Insider: Reliable as shown by their editorial policy and the author credentials.
- MFR: Looks unreliable as this primary source doesn't seem to do any independent news coverage; they're owned by a third party corporate and also there's no information on its editorial policy, author creds or about page.
- The Direct: Seems new and reliable, having checked their about page which consists of a solid body of staff writers.
- VICE: Prolific magazine with a decent about page but can have reliability issues as per WP:VICE and the article's staff writer being an outside contributor.
- MovieWeb: Looks reliable as shown by their about page and writer creds.
- NME: Ok, this has me worrying; the editor seems to be a non-staff contributor with the only info available on them being their posts. Also no editorial policy or an about page. The only thing saving it is this RSN discussion.
- CBC Kids: Reliable as shown by their about page and also being from a prolific news company.
- The Irish News: Reliable too by their about page and staff writer creds.
- Per WP:FORBESCON, these two sources by Forbes contributors can't be kept in the article.
- SlashFilm: Looks solid with the staff writer creds; and the same can be said for their about page, editorial policy and even a no-AI policy(!). This RSN discussion seems to underwhelm it though.
- ComicBook.com: Seems to be borderline reliable per their about page but this RSN discussion and the author creds show otherwise.
- Tell-Tale TV: Seems to be unreliable as there is no editorial policy and in the about page, the author info descriptions seems to go into personal hobbies or fan culture. Overall, the site looks like a fansite. Not to mention, the article author is a non-staff contributor and also a "blogger".
All the other sources used are reliable, secondary, and have independent coverage such as BBC, USA Today, The Independent, The Guardian etc.
Spotcheck
[edit]- To do later
Others
[edit]- Earwig report shows 41 per cent similarity but most are false positives as the quotes and series / show names are unavoidable to not mirror the sources.
- The article layout looks good but I'll have to check the MOS:WTW as there is a lot of opinion commentary given here which can slip in some of these words.
- The article is stable with no WP:EW as only the nominator edited and updated it for most of its timespan in the mainspace.
Discussion
[edit]- @Brynn Who Likes Editing: I have posted my suggestions above. Ping me when they're done. If you have any doubts, let me know. Good luck. Sddarealone (talk) 08:37, 18 September 2026 (UTC)
- The source itself, Collider, says
@amphibiaaccount was among the first to lay out the idea of an extended or hidden finale
. I'll say in the Wikipedia article "one of the first people". In solidarity, Brynn Who Likes Editing | talk w/ me! 09:11, 18 September 2026 (UTC) - @Sddarealone: I did all of them except for two.
- For changing
January 12, 2026, the day the behind-the-scenes, One Last Adventure: The Making of Stranger Things 5, would be released
toJanuary 12, 2026, the day when the behind-the-scenes of One Last Adventure: The Making of Stranger Things 5 would be released
, I did not remove the commas nor did I add the word "of" since One Last Adventure is the behind-the-scenes and saying "the behind-the-scenes of One Last Adventure" would be ungrammatical. - I did not change
January 7, 2026 was chosen as the alleged release date of a ninth episode
toJanuary 7, 2026 was allegedly chosen as the release date of a ninth episode
because Jan 7 was the date chosen by fans, and that fact is not alleged. What is alleged is the potential ninth episode, so the word "alleged" should be a descriptor of "release date of a ninth episode" and not "chosen". (However I understand what you mean and so I changed the wording here.) In solidarity, Brynn Who Likes Editing | talk w/ me! 14:25, 18 September 2026 (UTC)
- The source itself, Collider, says
- @Sddarealone: Yup, I wrote those texts in the last image. It actually says "I think she's dead, I don't know" which is a reference to what Sadie Sink said, at I think The Tonight Show Starring Jimmy Fallon, about whether she thought Eleven was alive. It's a fun little Easter egg for Stranger Things fans. And the yellow and blue coloring is also a reference to the Russian code Robin cracked in season 3, which was then adopted by the fandom, especially fans of the ship Byler, and soon it became a bit of color theory and evidence for Conformity Gate. I tried to be quite intentional while drawing the last image since it was created specifically for this page, and I hope the fandom will like it. In solidarity, Brynn Who Likes Editing | talk w/ me! 20:56, 18 September 2026 (UTC)
- I have checked the progress just now and the suggestions were done really well. The prose check should be completed by today and I'll follow it up with others if possible. Your fandom knowledge on this TV series is very cool; I'm a fan of Vampire Diaries so I can relate to it. Sddarealone (talk) 12:38, 19 September 2026 (UTC)
- @Brynn Who Likes Editing: I have completed doing the prose check and the later sections read well so I caught only a few issues to suggest if any. I'll be doing the references next which should also bring the NPOV concerns in order as I've seen in fan theories here. Ping me when the suggestions are done. Sddarealone (talk) 14:15, 19 September 2026 (UTC)
- Sorry to ask, but why is criterion 3b on hold? In solidarity, Brynn Who Likes Editing | talk w/ me! 16:38, 19 September 2026 (UTC)
- Due to a fairly high number of pop culture references, I wanted to take a re-look just to know if most of the body is related to the article subject or not. WP:COATRACK has been an issue with 3b in WP:GAN from what I've seen. Sddarealone (talk) 20:06, 19 September 2026 (UTC)
- I'm done all your suggestions. In solidarity, Brynn Who Likes Editing | talk w/ me! 16:47, 19 September 2026 (UTC)
- @Sddarealone: Pinging you like you asked In solidarity, Brynn Who Likes Editing | talk w/ me! 16:49, 19 September 2026 (UTC)
- Well done. I shall continue with rest of the review very soon. The wait will be worth it :) Sddarealone (talk) 20:08, 19 September 2026 (UTC)
- I made some bold edits to the article today. Let me know your thoughts. In solidarity, Brynn Who Likes Editing | talk w/ me! 15:51, 20 September 2026 (UTC)
- You struggled with rewording the sentence from Parade but I have to appreciate the patience you displayed here. A little thing you could do is rewrite the initial part of the sentence as
Parade's Liz Declan commenting on the Conformity Gate stated, ...
Also there isn't a need to use bracket quotes. You can write the full part into it:"While the documentary has therefore led to a new wave of negative responses and criticism, it ..."
. Sddarealone (talk) 04:59, 21 September 2026 (UTC)
Done Also I did some more bold edits and I think the article benefits a lot from it. In solidarity, Brynn Who Likes Editing | talk w/ me! 13:48, 21 September 2026 (UTC)
- You struggled with rewording the sentence from Parade but I have to appreciate the patience you displayed here. A little thing you could do is rewrite the initial part of the sentence as
- I made some bold edits to the article today. Let me know your thoughts. In solidarity, Brynn Who Likes Editing | talk w/ me! 15:51, 20 September 2026 (UTC)
- Well done. I shall continue with rest of the review very soon. The wait will be worth it :) Sddarealone (talk) 20:08, 19 September 2026 (UTC)
- @Sddarealone: Pinging you like you asked In solidarity, Brynn Who Likes Editing | talk w/ me! 16:49, 19 September 2026 (UTC)
- @Brynn Who Likes Editing: I have updated the review with a complete reference check. Ping me when it's done. I'll continue with the spotcheck next following which very little will be left to review. Good luck. Sddarealone (talk) 19:28, 21 September 2026 (UTC)
- I'm not done but I've made a few changes. Looking back, the article had a lot more OR and unreliable sources that I previously thought. This is probably because when I published it into the mainspace, I cited seven social media sites. In solidarity, Brynn Who Likes Editing | talk w/ me! 16:36, 22 September 2026 (UTC)
- That's alright as fan theories largely have their discussion on WP:USERG sources such as Reddit, X (or Twitter), Facebook etc. It's just not suitable to be kept in a GA-class article and the editors at AfD are going to tear it apart usually on the basis of WP:GNG. My suggestions will hence clear this benchmark. Good luck on completing all the ref check suggestions. Sddarealone (talk) 18:38, 22 September 2026 (UTC)
- Hi again! I've implemented some of your suggestions, and I'll continue to work on them. However I think that my studies and also my self-care might be interfering a bit, so please bear with me on this GA review. In solidarity, Brynn Who Likes Editing | talk w/ me! 18:41, 23 September 2026 (UTC)
- That's alright as fan theories largely have their discussion on WP:USERG sources such as Reddit, X (or Twitter), Facebook etc. It's just not suitable to be kept in a GA-class article and the editors at AfD are going to tear it apart usually on the basis of WP:GNG. My suggestions will hence clear this benchmark. Good luck on completing all the ref check suggestions. Sddarealone (talk) 18:38, 22 September 2026 (UTC)
- @Sddarealone: I've done your suggestions, let me know what you think. In solidarity, Brynn Who Likes Editing | talk w/ me! 21:11, 24 September 2026 (UTC)
- I'm not done but I've made a few changes. Looking back, the article had a lot more OR and unreliable sources that I previously thought. This is probably because when I published it into the mainspace, I cited seven social media sites. In solidarity, Brynn Who Likes Editing | talk w/ me! 16:36, 22 September 2026 (UTC)